The Lips or the Eyes

Within my mind

Doth the quandary arise;

Which mesmerizes most,

The lips or the eyes?


Viridescent diamonds.

Coruscate stare.

Arresting and piercing

In pulchritude. Rare.


The lips tho’ too

Are beauty besides.

As lovely to see

As much as the eyes.


Softer than sunset

Painting the sky.

The taste of eternity

Upon meeting mine.


I’ll spend my existence

With the aim to decide

Which is more splendid

The lips or the eyes.




3 Comments Add yours

  1. SauceBox says:

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    Liked by 1 person

  2. GANSU says:

    Beautifully written

    Liked by 1 person

    1. caillenjames says:

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I’m glad you enjoyed it

      Liked by 1 person

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