Don’t Ask Her to get Kinky

‘Despicable,

‘Deplorable,

‘And wholly unacceptable.’

Her reaction–understandable–

Still hurt me nonetheless.

‘Abominable,

‘And damnable,

‘And shamefully contemptible.

‘So show me you are penitent,

‘Drop down now and repent.’

On my knees now it’s regrettable,

My request it was retractable,

But she’s become excitable,

And now she’s found her kink.

 

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4 Comments Add yours

  1. Delightfully, wickedly naughty post

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    1. caillenjames says:

      I’m glad you enjoyed reading it; I certainly had fun writing it. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. It was cleverly constructed but not titillating. Clever word play, building this image of dispassionate, almost clinical observation and then the soft shoe shuffle as you think it’s going one way, then it goes the other.

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    2. caillenjames says:

      Thank you for the in-depth critique, Hayes. I’m happy to know I was able to keep you guessing

      Liked by 1 person

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